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Nice read! Your style of writing is good but I would like to advise you one thing. Do consider shortening the paragraph. They are always way too long and that could chase away new readers😄 Updating often is also a good way to gain avid readers! Good luck😊

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Thank you ... I will take into account your criticism ... and good advice ... which by the way, I am already applying in other works: see book: https://***.webnovel.com/book/prays-x-human_19156423206617005