Review Detail of ephemery in DEADIE

Great story! The plot is very intriguing as well as the world background. There are just some things I like to suggest though. Instead of referring to the characters as His/Her Highness [name], you can just opt to mention their first names instead to make it more easy to read. Also, I noticed some redundancy. Searching for synonyms about the same word might help. All in all, the book is already good, just a little editing and it could already line up with the best. Good job and keep writing!