Review Detail of TBS_23 in This Young Master is not Cannon Fodder

Great novel idea but poor execution om many points... Great to see a talented young master use all of the tools afforded to him wosely... A hero on the top from birth but also matches that with hardwork... Problems started when too many enemies escape for dumb reason and one of the top immortals just lets her son's future enemies escape... Also introducing clones for the MC made it into a story of multiple protagnists... That could have been developed into different that are updated maybe once a week to focus on the life and progress of his clones... Mixing the stories together like with Golden Finger just signifies how the clones serve no purpose at all except as experiments which he isn't even monitoring... Makes me think they are just invented as plot device for the experiments and he forgets about them... You can see the plot armor being built using the clones... One day when he is supposed to die the clone will sacrifice its self and save him... Plus making the clone female so it won't be traced to him makes no sense... He cultivated the clone using the egg of an animal pretty sure its already hard to trace... This feels like its just made for the clone to question its sexuality down the road if it falls in love with a female or male....