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The internal struggle in Ryo's mind is the highlight of this story. From what he went through during his adolescence up to when he was already an ex yakuza was so realistically laid out that I could practically perceive the pain he's going through. It gives us a feeling it can happen to any of us. That guilty struggle to right the wrong of the past but still ending up choosing an inescapable path of deceit really hits the spot. We've got a real marvel of a storyteller here. Great job, author! This one can potentially become a big scifi hit someday, so good luck 👌👍☺

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Violet9

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Violet9
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That was definitely my plan. The idea is that he never acts independently and relies on everyone to get the job done. Thanks so much for your review! I’ll definitely go back and proofread a ton after I release my 10th chapter! [img=recommend]