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J0ke_R
J0ke_RLv43yr
2021-03-17 00:08

Yo guys i will warn you in advance... MC is idiotic and it hurts like a bitch to read it sometimes so beware :D It's readable but not really good. Peace OUT !

Protagonist Killer

Dereck_Oliveira
4.5
130 Chs

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LickSuckEatMyBut
LickSuckEatMyButLv2

I dont wanna sound direspectfull but i know this novel will get dropped but i aint gonna this is a pretty good book so dont drop it even tho you will some day

3yr

Culture_Lover
Culture_LoverLv12

my honest opinion on the novel, please don't be offended: The first chapters in the hollow world was a good thing, but when we arrived in the human world everything changed for the worse (at least for me) I know that they do not receive money for this work and they do it just for fun, but wanting to write about some characters like yoruichi or kisuke without even having consideration for their basic personality and forcing a plot so simple that it does not express some love for writing makes the quality of the novel drop very low, I know that in webnovel there are not many good novels, but you The idea is really good, if it had been different you could have had a lot of support I think. Thank you

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Djabilong
DjabilongLv6

It was actually pretty darn good for the first couple dozen chapters, albeit a bit silly at times. But after a cetain point it all devolved into bland smut and two dimensional pointless villainy with no real goal and endless repetition. Still, I highly recommend reading the first thirty chapters or so, then deciding for yourself if you want to read the rest or not.

3yr
theunknown963
theunknown963Lv14

Tampilkan spoiler

3yr
AllFiction
AllFictionLv3

Tampilkan spoiler

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david_cuenca
david_cuencaLv2

It is very interesting, the truth is, I like how the main character is, I also like that I have the mission to kill ichigo that makes it more interesting and less cliché, it would also be good if

3yr
FBI_Nothis04
FBI_Nothis04Lv4

as many reviewers have stated before me the first half of the chapters are brutaly good (my opinion) and had potential to be one of the best fanfics on this site, the thing that changed my view was the lemon part of the story, don't get me wrong I'm a lemon lover like most readers here but in this case, at least for me, it worsened the story, many characters feel fake, as if they were automated s-exdolls with powers, I still read it but I have to admit that I will surely drop the moment the mc's objetive in bleach dies, I made this review with my personal opinion and preferences in mind so give it a try you might like it (especially if you love op battlejukie and extremely lusty mc's)also thanks to the author for making it.

3yr
JaxWolf4
JaxWolf4Lv4

I don't really know how to feel about this fanfic. It is good for the most part, but a lot of the story feels extremely forced. WQ - Few grammar errors. SoU - Frequent updates so far. SD - Decent but it is being sort of rushed. CD - The MC is a bland OP hollow and needs some more development. WB - Decent so far, it is following canon bleach, so nothing wrong here. Overall it is a decent fanfic if you don't mind the forced parts of the story. 3.8 stars.

3yr
AntiLoliLewding
AntiLoliLewdingLv4

Okay the story was okay, the prospects were so high but it was when the MC went into the human world where things took a deep dive. The characters feel one-sided, and the women have little to no development. The smut is excessive, and sometimes annoying. It had the chance to be better, seeing as how the term protagonist doesn't entirely mean hero. Overall, it was good, until the MC started to act like a horndog. I'll still be reading it since the author might listen to me but what do I know?

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