Review Detail of amaturewriter in 11111111111111222222

-Semi Simp [ SS ] and Plot Forced [ ** ] The only way to describe MC is he a SS cause he interested in a chick he just met and half his motivation is a fk her. But its SS cause,, he also wants to use her to get influence, power..so SS. not full S. The entire relationship is plot forced with MC complimenting her and getting her affection. compliment +1 love, and thats plot forced. Other than that its very interesting. MC has system and basically a RWBY tony stark,. Long ass chp and other shit all fine. Its written in manner which someone with RBWY can understand [ hope info is provided later on ] I suggest just dedicate a chp to show relationship or write a paragraph to show relationship progress [ something like couple months passed, etc ]rather the system compliment + 1 affection shit cause its shitty CD. other than that its good. And to also minimize system info use and jargon, it just messes the reading experience GL .. .