Review Detail of ephemery in Demoniac

Very well-written. The scenes are perfectly described and the plot is also interesting. The synopsis was good enough to hook people into reading. There was one thing I noticed though, I just want to suggest to make the chapters longer, probably 1.2k-2k characters since it will be more efficient to read, some readers would also prefer it too. However, this is only my opinion, it's still up to you. Good job and keep writing!