Review Detail of jhsilver in Harry Potter and Two Gamers

Read up to chapter 5, and I'm honestly impressed. I can't say much about grammar and spelling because I typically never focus on, it so long as it's readable, but I can say it's solid work. Only someone who was uptight about it would complain. For the most part, this story seems to be going for the more evil Dumbledore than the whole Manipulative, but still good Dumbledore, but it's only been 5 chapters so that might change A big plus to this story is that it appears the Author is actually planning the story ahead, and not just making things as he writes. The author seems to have an idea of where he wants his story to go. This pretty much all I could say about it so far(it's only 5 chapters so far). The only thing that bothers me would be this Ember Character for some reason she just kills the drive for me to continue to read this story, but the Harry Potter/MCU + Gamer tags keep my drive strong enough to continue. I don't know why she does, and this is just me I doubt others will have the same problem. All in all the first 5 chapters at least do a well enough Job to grab my interest, and I highly recommend people check this out.