Review Detail of ONGFRFR in The Dark Half-Dragon

pretty good word count and update so far, grammar could use a little work but other than a couple of typo's good start. if you keep writing for 50+ chapters this could be in the top 50🤔 character is a bit depressed/edgy but who's isn't, maybe don't follow the cannon completely and no harem but other than that I think this is good.👍👍👍👍👍