Review Detail of Phytrix in My Hermes System

Overall I found it to be an entertaining enough read but it is not without it's flaws. The first thing I found rather jarring and kept taking me out of the story is the focus on eyes way too much. "He squinted , He blinked his eyes ( the latter part is unnecessary), His eye twitches . idk if it's purposely done by the author but I found it quite annoying how much people are squinting or eyes twitching. Another thing that I was weirded out by was the lying done by the MC. Makes no sense , has no reason , and is immediately figured out. What's the point? it's annoying , stop giving fake names for no reason. Lastly , I feel like the chapters are way too short for premium, some chapters hardly anything ever progresses plot wise and it feels bad paying for little progress.