Review Detail of Mylon in Song of Creation- The Legacy

An awesome story with very strong details and superb world creation! The only thing that I want to critique on is the pace of story. I felt that the some parts of the story were very slow while the others were at a pleasant pace. I have also complimented on the accuracy and the detailed explanation in the story but I feel that it could also be a double edged sword. An example of this could be in the first few chapters, the protagonist and his actions were very detailed but till the near end of the first chapter, all the protagonist had done was exit of his room. The ceremony in the second chapter was also beautifully and accurately described but I don't think it progressed much of the story even though it took about half the chapter. Overall, the critiques that I have stated are all due to personal preferences. This is a very well written novel till now and I'm quite certain that it will pop off in the future if the author keeps working on it! Good luck!