Review Detail of WealthyRaccoon in Extradimensional Traveler

while the writing is above average for fanfiction the overall plot doesn't make much sense, with characters making choices that are beyond shortsighted and often straight up negligent once or twice a chapter. for a couple examples: 1) why isn't axel immediately taken into the Jedi order? he's 3 years old, as powerful as Anakin and has no attachments. he is literally the holy grail of Jedi padawans, and yet they place more attention on Anakin, what? 2) why do they take axel back to naboo? he's 3 literally every other option is better than todler in a war zone. I know it's just so the author can follow the plot but if you're changing nothing about cannon there's no reason to be there. 3) why isn't Padme at the Senate to spectator Palpatine and everything else? she literally worships buerocracy but instead decides to spend her time with a 3 year old? no. so yeah writings totally fine, but you really need to assess why characters make the choices they make.