Shameless review from the Author! Well, the first thing I want to outline is that I want to describe a situation when mana was suddenly injected into the world and what would happen with civilization in that case. I can promise that I won't drop the story no matter what since I already love writing it. Perhaps, the writing quality will be slightly lacking in the initial stages, but I'll try to get better at it, so enjoy the story. Regarding the worldbuilding and story, I plan to take my time to shape the story, so the story itself is planned to be long.
JustAWanderer
Disukai oleh 22 orang
SUKAThe_Game_Master:Consider getting a proofreader to find and correct all those Grammer mistakes and messy sentences. It is very visible that you love this story solely from the chapter count. By having so many linguistic mishaps, it makes it harder and harder for readers to follow the story. Keep up the momentum dear author :)
Im sorry im a little confused.. so female leads mean it is a harem ending or just romantic interests?
JustAWanderer:Two or three female leads
Brian70707:Read the synopsis but not story yet 1 question doesn't regression make mc immortal At dying does back in time, end of his life after say 100 years goes back in time Like bigger version of groundhog day
DriftingDragon:Im sorry im a little confused.. so female leads mean it is a harem ending or just romantic interests?
Consider getting a proofreader to find and correct all those Grammer mistakes and messy sentences. It is very visible that you love this story solely from the chapter count. By having so many linguistic mishaps, it makes it harder and harder for readers to follow the story. Keep up the momentum dear author :)
Sadly, I can't give a sufficiently in depth answer to this question since I haven't finished the first chapter. However, I can provide the email of an old English teacher of mine. If you are interested that is.
JustAWanderer:Just curious here, does the grammar gets better along the chapters?
I read the book through twice now its a well made world with a good story and power scaling is not bad grammar is not necessary perfect but it's a good read I like the way it's developing just need to add some more twist to mcs Power but I'm curious as to why there hasn't been updates and if you plan to continue