Review Detail of Lumis in Hell Gate

For now there isn't much chapters, but potencial is big. This story have realy uniqe form of storytelling. Even if you don't see mc whole chapter it is still something to behold. Personaly i hope that this one won't be droped like lot of my favourite stories. All in all this is definetly great story with potencial to get into top 100. Only thing that could go bad is author being lost in plot or loose sight and ending up in dead end. For author: possible arcs - corupted humans like ARC; crystal calamity (something along them being very powerfull catalysts); Confronttion with Religion (Apostoles and theyr gods, what happends with souls); Hell trips (who dont want to accidently ending up in hell)