Review Detail of WHITE in “Obsessed”

the writing quality is good and simple, so its really easy to understand. the character designing is also good and i am waiting for more development. the author could describe the backgrounds and what the mc sees. the pace of the story is also good. try to avoid grammatical mistakes as much as possible. also try to describe each moment more, because i kinda felt you were rushing with to complete the chapter. overall, its a good read and easy to follow. Good job!!