Review Detail of OPxSILENT in Divine Blacksmith

Sup~ Author here :D I wish for you to enjoy my novel :D I know that I'm not that good at grammar, as you can see there's so much error that needed to be fixed because English is not my first language, I just want to make my own story so all I can ask is for you to enjoy... If you can hahaha. Free to leave your comment, review and you can criticize if you want I'm open for suggestion and advice Thanks :D