Review Detail of 1740 in A SUPER RICH GUY

the story is great. the characters are not so bad, and the plot line is actually great too, but the novel is in great need of editing. It feels like the novel was translated by a machine. the grammatical errors kill the whole vibe and feeling of the novel. please get someone to edit it. I can also help to edit if you give me access cause this is really a great story that shouldn't go to waste !