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Review Detail of Anotoki in Descent in Another World

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Anotoki
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The first few chapters lack something, I can't explain it in detail but it is, it also not bad and it is good, BUT predictable, I'm not saying that it's boring, no, I'm saying that there is nothing to spice things up, like maybe the route to the village is blocked by natural disaster, or a hero that suddenly betrayed the kingdom in the midst of chaos, but in truth that hero is under control. I'm sorry if my review hurts your feeling

Descent in Another World

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hahaha its alright! In fact I appreciate your review, thank you very much! I will keep it in mind when moving forward with the story!