Review Detail of Neadeath in What is real peace ?

Hello everyone, it's me Neadeath, the author of this story. Please note that if you are reading this story, English is not my native language. I'm doing my best to get my English right, but there are some subtleties where I still struggle and I apologize in advance. I also want you to know that this story is a translation of my work that I wrote in French. This one is already finished and I'm translating one chapter per day. You can try to find this story in French and translate it with google translate, but I find that it translates badly. Anyway, thank you very much for taking the time to read this story and I hope you enjoy it.