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A very solid webnovel in it's current state. There are a few things that should be worked on such as punctuations and whatnot but the overall story is quite engaging, I like the world building and the characters aren't all that bad. The character design really doing it for but maybe that's cause I lack imagination. Overall has a great story and plot, looking forward to future chapters and what's to come.

Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

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Thanks for the review 😅 I'll try to fix up the grammatical errors in the story 😅