Review Detail of RJMidnight in Accidentally Awakened a Prince

Your story is on the right track, but your grammar has a bit of problems. Dialogue examples on how they should be written: “How is the child doing?” The king asked the tutor for his son. “Wonderful,” the tutor started, “but his mind tend to wonder a lot.” Another thing you keep putting (...?) is that your style of writing? If it is, it is fine then. And one last thing, you put the 19th century and then talked about the technology they have. The 19th century is the 1800s and technology didn’t really come until mid 1900s. I think you meant the 20th century here. (The 21st century is now). Unless this world is different, then keep doing what you are doing. This story has potential and looks interessting. Keep up the good work!