Review Detail of BobTheRob in Pokemon Storm

There is nothing wrong with the fic, but it's just not my type. Read till chapter 5 and up until now I am not liking what I see. - MC is one of those who don't want to change cannon and tries his best to make sure things stay in line just like anime. - He for some reason is dead set on having Ash as his rival. - He waited for days in Pewter city for Ash and Misty to catch up with him, and it seems like this is going to happen again and again. - He is way to focused on making sure that Ash becomes an actual trainer instead of the joke he was in the anime and wastes too much time on him. - And just now he decided not to take charmander because he was an important part of Ash's team(this just broke the deal for me). - So from what I see this is going to be the kind of story where MC goes around helping people and fixing all the mistake that were made in canon without getting anything in return and is afraid to make any big changes.