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Dark_Sorcerer
Dark_SorcererLv104yr
2020-10-01 09:06

Creo que esta historia tiene mucho potencial pero que, lamentablemente, el autor no lo consigue. Aún así, de momento estoy disgrutando de la historia mínimamente. No obstante, hay una cosa que me molesta un poco. Y es: la mala puntuación que hay a nivel textual. Los puntos en las historias son súper necesarios, pero parece ser que al autor no le gustan mucho, pues en lugares que sería conveniente poner puntos pone comas. En general, está bien, pero a la vez un tanto mediocre.

Harry Potter y las Guerras de las Sombras (ESPAÑOL)

kevin123poke
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94 Chs

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kevin123poke
kevin123pokeAuthor

esta es la primera vez que escribo. no soy bueno ya que nunca lo hice, pero gracias por tu mensaje siempre trato de mejorar.

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Dark_Sorcerer
Dark_SorcererLv10

Mucho ánimo!

4yr
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kevin123poke
kevin123pokeAuthor

Hello, I am the author of this book, thanks for reading this fanfic, I am a novice author and my native language is not English. Any suggestion I will always be reading the comments. I appreciate your reading and your time.

4yr

Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5

Me gustó la novela, al principio un poco lenta, pero si se toman el tiempo llegará al capítulo 5 por lo menos es muy buena. El MC no tiene conocimiento del mundo Harry Potter, participó en la guerra, murió joven y una muerte Única podría decirse, sabe un poco de la crueldad pero a la vez es inocente en algunas cosas, y tiene la suerte pora esquivar varios problemas. Uno de sus hobbies sería a cultivar y plantar de mi parte me gustaría que plante tomates y sandía y por la parte de planta sería durazno uva y ciruela Violeta

4yr
lalo_fernandez
lalo_fernandezLv1

Empieza un poco rara la novela, aunque la originalidad es mas que visible, puede ser muy confuso si no llegas hasta el cap 6, no da la sensacion de ser una novela de harry potter pero si es entretenida, si hay algo de lo cual quejarse seria el nivel textual, se nota que el autor es primerizo, espero mas capítulos

3yr
ana_lilia
ana_liliaLv1

Me gusto, espero mas del autor :D +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

3yr
kevin_turpo
kevin_turpoLv1

La historia es muy buena aunque el uso de las mitologías y otras cosas no da la sensación que sea harry potter, pero por ahora esta siendo entretenida, espero que la historia no se distorsione,

3yr
Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2

Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?s this a huge harem?

4yr
manzanaverde
manzanaverdeLv1

Muy bueno, no estaba encontrando historias en español que sean atrapantes y esta, a parte de ser de Harry Potter, es muy interesante y entretenida, saludos!

4yr
jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5

interesing. **********************************************************************************************************************************************************

4yr
DaoistWFSmO0
DaoistWFSmO0Lv1

more chapthers pls +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

3yr
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