Review Detail of melancholy_sins0 in Her Minds Instinct

I'm not even going to read beyond chapter 2 before giving a review, because that's just how good it is. Look. Character development, story development, and everything that makes a novel good, disregarding the actual storyline, is incredibly hard to do. Y' know what the author did? The beginning of the story provided more "flow" than my entire story will ever have. That's just how skilled I found it. In fact, I find it crazy that this novel hasn't exploded yet. Like many people have already said, there are just enough details that it doesn't ruin the "visualization" of the image the author directed through her/his/ it's words. But yet, it's so detailed at the same time, that it confuses me (guilty of over-detailing lol). Don't be discouraged by the large rating, nor the synopsis. Just read the darn chapter, and don't waste your time love. aNd If I SEe "yOu have gRAmMar iSsUEs. I WiLl suE YoU I'm kidding, I love you lol <3 You too author.