Review Detail of Spelloyal in Take’s Hidden Path

This fanfic really has some problems, like the development of the MC which was not very good and the other characters have a very weak presence and seem unimportant. But these are acceptable problems that I would expect to see in a beginning author. I personally am not very picky (especially with fanfics and free content) and I really liked the story. Overall it is a good fanfic, it may be a good idea for the author to read other danmachi fanfics like Wish Fullfiment System and study the intention among the characters to improve their fanfic and bring the story to life. Thanks for the good job author-san !!! (Sorry for any errors i used google translator)