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Interesting. So it's like the MC is reincarnated to someone in the Edo(?) era. <-- lol i'm not sure about the name. It will be cool to see a story about samurai lives as i have never read anything like this before. It's very well written, but one thing that i don't really like is that how you use dots a lot in their dialogues. I feel like when you use too many dots in their dialogues, they kinda sounds sad when i read it. Like they talk gloomily? But i don't know if it's just me or that's what others think too haha. But still, the plot is very interesting and i hope to see more of this. Good job, Author!

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Thanks for your advice. The mc is being reincarnated into the sengoku period. I do admit there are many ... in dialogues. I just use them to express thought in their words, or a pause in their thoughts. I will lessen them, if it makes the story more enjoyable. Thanks for your ideas