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Review Detail of DarkseidEquation in Throne of Ashes

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Historical fantasy really attracts my attention and this book really does that. It has great pacing to it's paragraphs and also to the overall narrative. The dialogue is great at showing characters like the main character Allyria. My only problem is it can be so much better if it goes into description much more of the situation and lets it slow down more. But this is great right now.

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Thank you so much! I appreciate that you made sure to point out the things I'm lacking. I will surely put that in mind