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I am impressed with your Character and world-building skills. The imagination of the author is great! This story will not bore you out. It has so many layers of intriguing plots. Indeed, it is a promising story that needs a chance to be noticed. My only worry is the congestion of the paragraphs, proofread, and some proper usage of punctuations and spacing. Over-all it is 10 for me! This is a must-read!