Review Detail of Maxinonor in Pokemon: insect trainer

The story has a lot of promise but the author made him powerful to fast and for no solid reason , because the mc started at 7 he should have trained for the 3 years to reach the level he was at chapter 12 and build up from there because he know now what to do and has his pokemon to help him. I know that bug type grow faster but he could have use the time to develop the bond of the mc and his pokemon instead of make so he hatch them they are 100 loyal also we dont know anything about them apart they can take on a dragonite and are more powerful than normal for the short time he trained them . And he keeps finding pokemon that are stronger than average and shinys, he could have good luck and find/hatch a shiny but dont exaggerate it, even Ash the only good quality he has is godly luck only caught one shiny. The writing is done by google translation , a way to better put it is to make less walls of text when he explaining things to improve and maybe also put smaller sentences in the translator to make it feel more natural. He updates regularly so thats nice i dont know how long it will last but if he can make a updates every 2-3 days it will be a nice. And for the world because of the the way he puts the writing it can feel to much at times if you dont very well pokemon but he has a somewhat nice systems to become trainer. I hope this helps in improving your writing and the story. When i wrote this i read till chapter 13 i may comeback to edit