Nicely done! The plot was interesting and somewhat mysterious. The description and narrations were very easy to read although I can say that the writing quality still has lots of room for improvement. I do suggest you make the synopsis less vivid. Two-three sentences might not be enough to get your readers hooked. Still, good job and keep writing!
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