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Browneyesblkdragon
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2022-12-05 15:31

Where do I begin?!? I‘ve read a few stories that were slightly similar in dynamic between the female lead and male lead. However, they diverged to the point where the female lead was propped up by the destruction of the male lead. I think the book started with Alpha and ended in ride 🤷🏾‍♀️ With that out of the way. Let me tell you how amazing this book is/was. The character development of the female lead having her go through dangerous and challenging times to build up her character to inevitably meet an equally if not stronger male lead to walk alongside made my heart soar with love and admiration with how their relationship flourished. There was plenty of laughter, danger, emotional turmoil, strife, tumultuous hurdles, and victory along with other things mixed in made this book a crazy roller coaster ride I couldn’t get enough of. I will acknowledge that there were quite a few grammatical and syntax errors. However, it’s easy to look past those when the story pulls you in. You can easily rearrange the words to make it easy for the reader to understand where the author was going in the story. Let us not forget the world building. The fact that this author managed to fit in so many creatures of Lore and different planes of existence to enhance the story to the point where it got to a fever pitch at the end was truly majestic😘👏🏾🙌🏾 I could easily go in meticulous detail about the characters and how the character development was impeccable. However, I do have one gripe and that is Cole’s character developlment left me a little empty inside especially concerning his… um… preference 😏 I would have loved to know whether that would’ve come to frutition or not (I’m not trying to give too much away 😋). Nevertheless, this book gets a rating of 1,000,000,000 out 10 for creativity and just plain awesomeness 🙌🏾

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MishaK
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review 😘 You've made my day! Cole's development can be seen in the book Dark Hunger:) And I would love if you could join my Discord community of like minded readers ♥️

Browneyesblkdragon
BrowneyesblkdragonLv15

Thank you for responding to my review. It’s not often I come across a story that makes me binge read it so as to not lose out on it’s wonder. I’m not much for online discourse as I prefer to have face to face conversations about books, but it doesn’t mean I won’t consider join 👏🏾

MishaK:Thank you so much for your wonderful review 😘 You've made my day! Cole's development can be seen in the book Dark Hunger:) And I would love if you could join my Discord community of like minded readers ♥️
Hime974
Hime974Lv15

if you like this book i can't help but have to read this too 😁

Browneyesblkdragon
BrowneyesblkdragonLv15

Lol, I only leave reviews on books that were worth my time 😏

Hime974:if you like this book i can't help but have to read this too 😁
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