Review Detail of Yuri_is_Ntr in My Touch Corpse System

Not bad but have some really weird problems. Like i guess I know why author choose Chinese name for mc - because every little events stretch out for like 3-4 chapters each. With repeative jokes and bashing of the characters. I am not even kidding, 4 chapters of bashing on mc of htdod with the same jokes. I don't care about him. Maybe try writing story-line properly? Or mc interactions with girls? And even so, mc system just too op, he became stronger too fast even though plot isn't moving at all. I don't think story would actually live for long with such weird pace. And yes, joke repeated too much. It's wouldn't be bad if jokes where actually good, but most of them wasn't good in a first place. Weird fixation of author on someone feet, or men's аsses - like really? Why so many jokes about licking someone feet, or fucking guy аss? But still, even with those weird and serious problem of pacing - it's still intresting, because mc is interesting by himself. So it's kinda have potential.