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Venom_God
Venom_GodLv123yrVenom_God

mc gets raped, if u want to read this u have to know that the cool mc has loose asshole, he got raped by a lot of people over the years. and his other fanfic was fucking trash too, his other fanfic is called The Most Powerful Quirkless (Completed Story). the mc was just fucking trash and garbage, dropped that **** at chap 5 and my friend told me the mc got ntred from that fanfic haha, it happens at chap 101 to 102, so its confirmed that the author hates his mc, fucking trash author, i wish i can give him -5 star

By sacrificing the wicked, a better world is created.

gglhbjkyyj

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Konuro1
Konuro1Lv10Konuro1

yeah it's your fvck opinion, but when you insult the hard work of another people it's not like i must respect your shitty free-speech

Daniel_Oliveira_4824
Daniel_Oliveira_4824Lv1Daniel_Oliveira_4824

If you're so badass and critical, why not write your own fanfic? After all, since you give a star just because you don't like something, you clearly must be able to do something better. I read both fanfics, and the Author did a huge amount of research and gave logical reasons behind what he did in his novel. I even understand that you give a low grade for something like grammar, or else because of the long waiting time in releases. But giving a low grade for personal taste to discourage an author who is struggling to write is just proving himself as an envious person who does this type of action just because he cannot create a better one. If you can do better, then complain, otherwise close your mouth and let people evaluate when reading, because they are people like you that makes many good authors give up their novels.

gglhbjkyyj
gglhbjkyyjPenulisgglhbjkyyj

If you think I'm so bad, I have to agree with Daniel_Oliveira_4824 and ask you to create something better. After all I am very bad at writing and you wanted to give me -5 stars, it shouldn't be so hard to do something better. Mainly because even my translation sucks because I don't know English and rely only on apps, my other novel still has an average rating of 4.3. And this is after being evaluated 106 times, and with several people like you who undermine my effort simply because they have nothing better to do.

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

okay author, lvl 1

Daniel_Oliveira_4824:If you're so badass and critical, why not write your own fanfic? After all, since you give a star just because you don't like something, you clearly must be able to do something better. I read both fanfics, and the Author did a huge amount of research and gave logical reasons behind what he did in his novel. I even understand that you give a low grade for something like grammar, or else because of the long waiting time in releases. But giving a low grade for personal taste to discourage an author who is struggling to write is just proving himself as an envious person who does this type of action just because he cannot create a better one. If you can do better, then complain, otherwise close your mouth and let people evaluate when reading, because they are people like you that makes many good authors give up their novels.
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

lvl 1, probably an author and if u like ntr and mc getting raped then good for u, is my opinion so why u getting salty, and I can write better then ur trash ass raped mc and the mc that got cucked, I mean the first review says it all, it got 13 likes. why did u even think about making the mc gets raped, ur the author so don't say i could not do anything and I have to let it play it out.

gglhbjkyyj:If you think I'm so bad, I have to agree with Daniel_Oliveira_4824 and ask you to create something better. After all I am very bad at writing and you wanted to give me -5 stars, it shouldn't be so hard to do something better. Mainly because even my translation sucks because I don't know English and rely only on apps, my other novel still has an average rating of 4.3. And this is after being evaluated 106 times, and with several people like you who undermine my effort simply because they have nothing better to do.
gglhbjkyyj
gglhbjkyyjPenulisgglhbjkyyj

I considered the most likely scenarios, it's that simple, tell me do you really believe that in a city like Gotham is portrayed, is there any chance that a red-haired child with golden eyes, beautiful and orphan will grow up quietly? The chances of that are minimal, and that is because any criminal in the city would want to profit from this situation, even in DC itself there were several cases that Batman tried to prevent this type of thing. Leon was not someone that Batman would be babysitting 24 hours a day, and it was a fact that Cobblepot would not be imprisoned for long. Sooner or later he would have been caught in that ****, because no one in their right mind would want to adopt a child who was the target of the Cobblepot. Not even Batman would do it, as he only recruited people who really had something in common with him or showed high potential. If I wanted to follow my story, with the MC starting in Gotham while he was realistic I would have to say that Leon was targeted, because no matter how you look, a red-haired, handsome boy with golden eyes would be worth a fortune in the human trafficking market or prostitution. And if it weren't for the Cobblepot, another of the bosses would have gone after Leon, because it's impossible to think that he would grow up in a city that has more than 35% of the population as criminals, where none of the goons would talk about it with someone who wanted to profit from it. And honestly, if I wanted to create an MC that goes around taking power from the beyond without any explanation, I could have added in the wish that he had the power of Bills, Kaguya, Zeno, and whoever else I could think of. When I create my MCs, I think of a goal he can strive for, and I use that to develop the story. I try to keep myself in logical situations most of the time. I spend several hours of my day whenever I write to research information, before writing it in a chapter, because I try not to be like some authors who simply give absurd powers without researching anything, do not give an objective to their MCs, and then they drop the story. I had a lot of bad reviews on this topic, and I didn't care about any of them. The reason I revolt against yours is that you didn't even bother to think what the most obvious situation would be, and you posted that **** just because you thought it was since my story is not your taste, you could say the **** you wanted. You didn't even try to look at the situation before writing this crap review. So I repeat to you, if you think you can do something better, go ahead and do it. I don’t earn a penny to write, I do it to distract myself, and help other people to do the same, but when I read a comment like yours, which is not only unthinkable but also insulting considering that not even writing to help others you do, it discourages me even to write. **. You have a lot of likes because complaints always get more, no matter what novel it is, unless the author has really good grammar, the criticisms with more Like are always negative And as I said before, I don't speak the language. And for your information, I am a Level 4 Author.

Venom_God:lvl 1, probably an author and if u like ntr and mc getting raped then good for u, is my opinion so why u getting salty, and I can write better then ur trash ass raped mc and the mc that got cucked, I mean the first review says it all, it got 13 likes. why did u even think about making the mc gets raped, ur the author so don't say i could not do anything and I have to let it play it out.
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

haha, I called it, I said u were going to blame it on the story, anyway im out fam.

gglhbjkyyj:I considered the most likely scenarios, it's that simple, tell me do you really believe that in a city like Gotham is portrayed, is there any chance that a red-haired child with golden eyes, beautiful and orphan will grow up quietly? The chances of that are minimal, and that is because any criminal in the city would want to profit from this situation, even in DC itself there were several cases that Batman tried to prevent this type of thing. Leon was not someone that Batman would be babysitting 24 hours a day, and it was a fact that Cobblepot would not be imprisoned for long. Sooner or later he would have been caught in that ****, because no one in their right mind would want to adopt a child who was the target of the Cobblepot. Not even Batman would do it, as he only recruited people who really had something in common with him or showed high potential. If I wanted to follow my story, with the MC starting in Gotham while he was realistic I would have to say that Leon was targeted, because no matter how you look, a red-haired, handsome boy with golden eyes would be worth a fortune in the human trafficking market or prostitution. And if it weren't for the Cobblepot, another of the bosses would have gone after Leon, because it's impossible to think that he would grow up in a city that has more than 35% of the population as criminals, where none of the goons would talk about it with someone who wanted to profit from it. And honestly, if I wanted to create an MC that goes around taking power from the beyond without any explanation, I could have added in the wish that he had the power of Bills, Kaguya, Zeno, and whoever else I could think of. When I create my MCs, I think of a goal he can strive for, and I use that to develop the story. I try to keep myself in logical situations most of the time. I spend several hours of my day whenever I write to research information, before writing it in a chapter, because I try not to be like some authors who simply give absurd powers without researching anything, do not give an objective to their MCs, and then they drop the story. I had a lot of bad reviews on this topic, and I didn't care about any of them. The reason I revolt against yours is that you didn't even bother to think what the most obvious situation would be, and you posted that **** just because you thought it was since my story is not your taste, you could say the **** you wanted. You didn't even try to look at the situation before writing this crap review. So I repeat to you, if you think you can do something better, go ahead and do it. I don’t earn a penny to write, I do it to distract myself, and help other people to do the same, but when I read a comment like yours, which is not only unthinkable but also insulting considering that not even writing to help others you do, it discourages me even to write. **. You have a lot of likes because complaints always get more, no matter what novel it is, unless the author has really good grammar, the criticisms with more Like are always negative And as I said before, I don't speak the language. And for your information, I am a Level 4 Author.
gglhbjkyyj
gglhbjkyyjPenulisgglhbjkyyj

I am not blaming the story, the choice to follow this path was mine. I could easily have chosen to be unrealistic and change my choices to please others like you, but do you know the truth? This would only displease other people, in addition to reducing the quality of my plot, if you don't want to read great, I simply hope that you stop writing these **** reviews in other Novels. Because to say that something is bad, it is really simple, to do better is what is difficult.

Venom_God:haha, I called it, I said u were going to blame it on the story, anyway im out fam.
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

I actually never wrote a review on ur other fanfic, even tho I hated it, but this one was just stupid, remember u said there is a low chance that the mc won’t get used like a sex slave in Gotham(is still a chance but u went and made the mc get raped by bunch of niggas over the years, he probably got gangbanged too) and u could have made the mc born in a family or just make the mc get memory from young, so pls don’t say u have no option but to follow the stupid realistic **** ur saying. U just wanted a mc with a loose asshole that learned how to suck niggas dick too.

gglhbjkyyj:I am not blaming the story, the choice to follow this path was mine. I could easily have chosen to be unrealistic and change my choices to please others like you, but do you know the truth? This would only displease other people, in addition to reducing the quality of my plot, if you don't want to read great, I simply hope that you stop writing these **** reviews in other Novels. Because to say that something is bad, it is really simple, to do better is what is difficult.
gglhbjkyyj
gglhbjkyyjPenulisgglhbjkyyj

Yes, there is a chance, I never said it didn't exist. But it is below 1%. If I'm going to change the odds, for everything that might be a heavy subject, my Novel will stop being logical, and enter a situation where it would just become a fantasy. This is not my writing style. That is why when readers inform me that I put some wrong information in the novel, I change it and change all subsequent chapters that I have already written. A perfect example was the number of Gotham residents. The chances of a scene where the MC could have grown for 16 years, without being discovered by Cobblepot or other people in Gotham who used it that way, is below 1%. These are almost the same chances that a common family in China will find an oil well in the yard today. It can happen, but the chances are practically nil. It is easy to create an unrealistic story where the orphaned MC, with red hair, golden eyes, and great beauty, goes to Gotham and live a life like the one you and all the people who didn't like Rape want to happen. But that would be unrealistic and it would only satisfy you. I'll say it again, I try to research the most likely scenarios, and with the wishes that were made. This scenario is the most likely. I did the same with my other novel. A scenario where an individual Quirkless becomes a hero is unrealistic, no matter how much a situation is seen. And when I approached the topic, the number of criticisms I received was colossal. If you want to stop reading, that's fine, but honestly, I just hope you don't leave that kind of comment in other authors' novels. The discouragement I felt when I read this one, in particular, was enormous. It is already difficult for an author to write a novel that escapes the MC Overpower standard that only cares for itself, and does everything it wants for itself and for no one else. Reading a review like that simply discourages anyone from continuing.

Venom_God:I actually never wrote a review on ur other fanfic, even tho I hated it, but this one was just stupid, remember u said there is a low chance that the mc won’t get used like a sex slave in Gotham(is still a chance but u went and made the mc get raped by bunch of niggas over the years, he probably got gangbanged too) and u could have made the mc born in a family or just make the mc get memory from young, so pls don’t say u have no option but to follow the stupid realistic **** ur saying. U just wanted a mc with a loose asshole that learned how to suck niggas dick too.
spookyBOA
spookyBOALv13spookyBOA

wow....... I get you want to share your thoughts and opinions but you don't have to be such a d*ck about it. I also don't get why you continued to bring up levels even though you haven't ever made a story and he's made like three. Is it that hard to give constructive criticism like you just have to say what you didn't like and what you did. if you were a writer or you aleast made a fanfic or two I think people would respect your opinion but no one really care's what you think

Valhalla123
Valhalla123Lv3Valhalla123

how? I haven't read the story but The Most powerful quirkless only has 67 chapters.

Valhalla123
Valhalla123Lv3Valhalla123

how? I haven't read the story but The Most powerful quirkless only has 67 chapters.

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

Go and look at the Chapter post, he puts it togther like chap 1/2/3 and so on

Valhalla123:how? I haven't read the story but The Most powerful quirkless only has 67 chapters.
Valhalla123
Valhalla123Lv3Valhalla123

ok

Venom_God:Go and look at the Chapter post, he puts it togther like chap 1/2/3 and so on
skylaw
skylawLv2skylaw

if you think his fan fict are trash why the **** don't you make one to see if you are any better than him if you don't then just shut the **** up with your stupid agressive comment Don't ruine the fun of the others!!!

skylaw
skylawLv2skylaw

I personally think that the author does a magnificent job which remains extremely realistic, based on facts from history which are very probable. Personally I love his way of writing because I have never found this kind of writing in any of the dozens of fan fiction that I have read so far. Continue like this auther and do not bother to respond to this kind of unnecessary and purely aggressive commentary.

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

Lol, is my fucking opinion, There is always a Shitty person like u goinng around saying why dont u make ur own fanfic...nigga just shut up.. this is reviews and im saying what i dont fucking like and if someone else sees and dont like the same shit then they dont have to waste there time.... is just like if someone else sees a rape or notrare in the novel, there going to warn others and leave reviews... if u like it hood for u and nobody gives a **** cuz this is a fucking reviews

skylaw:if you think his fan fict are trash why the **** don't you make one to see if you are any better than him if you don't then just shut the **** up with your stupid agressive comment Don't ruine the fun of the others!!!
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_GgazeliLv10Marcelinho_Ggazeli

the MC is reported as a victim of human trafficking, he suffers experiences of torture and countless other things but you ignore all this because he was raped, at no time is the rape act detailed, it is only quoted in the past, to give such a note low on such a good work just because the word "rape" is sometimes said doesn't even make sense