Review Detail of ImmortalWriter in World Star System

The story is okay, it's about a guy who becomes a star with his system. The problem is that I got tired reading this novel. MC is of course the most handsome you will ever see in a novel. MC is nothing without his system. Zero world building. Reading this novel became pointless. I can't get excited. System tossed everything towards our MC. Author wrote a similar novel to this. The world building is way better in that one. The characters got more personality in that one.