Review Detail of MasterOfTheCouch in The Point Legacy

Have to give myself a four because I write very slowly and thus cannot update very quickly, this really pains me because when I write a novel I want it to be a story that I love, something that I myself would love to read. If the novel doesn't fulfill my exacting standards, I am usually harsh in my criticism (although I don't like to be mean, so I usually don't leave reviews in novels that I did not enjoy) So, here goes... It might be a bit too early to rate my story development, character design and world background but I can review my writing quality. I take great pain to deliver a reading experience that I hope is grammatically error free, I love to add semi obscure words to at least challenge a readers vocabulary, if you don't come out of a book without learning anything, then what is the point? I do limit myself to not make the book full of flowery language as I firmly believe that a book which cannot be enjoyed by everyone regardless of their understanding of English just becomes pretentious (some people might fight me on this point but this is what I believe in) I cannot rate my character design, story development and world background yet as I am only on chapter 5. I will update this review once I have written more chapters. P.S - If you did not agree with some of the points I raised, feel free to reply to this with your argument. I do love a good debate, as long as it doesn't devolve into an all out brawl.