WQ 4 for good grammar SD 3 for being average story development CD 1 for beta MC (girls' slave) US 5 for stability updates WB 2 for unclear world background
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Disukai oleh 4 orang
SUKAHaven't read it, but skipped through the chapters to check... You had him doing dogeza... that's pretty beta lol
I_hate_tragedies:Umm... did you read it clearly? what do you mean beta mc and why did you give a 5 for stability of updates when even I don't know when I will update?