Review Detail of Glenstonx in King and Queen of the business world

HI author! Ive noticed some errors. T smoothen the reading flow, please edit and correct those mistakes. The grammar and punctuation, as well as the dialogue tag, are making me stop from reading because it is too noticeable and redundant. The story, however, is gradually becoming interesting the further I read. The characters are firm and their personality and characteristic is well written keep writing and good luck!