I applaud you; Story well done! Please say that this story will continue because I really hope it does! I'll admit that I was a little wary in the beginning since how many other stories sound the same, but you completely got me hook, line, and sinker. The tone is incredibly dynamic that I didn't even notice when the scene changed, it felt natural. The characters really seemed to fall into themselves halfway through; Nothing felt rushed or out-of-place. I love the fact that ML was just as foxy as the MC. I was a put off as to who it was, the ML, but I think I'm certain in who I think it is. I'm curious as to where you're going to go from here but there is so much potential that I'm sure whatever it is, it'll be great. Again, loved it.
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