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I read this entire story and just finished today. Mainly took points off for all the grammatical errors, incorrect character names (as in putting 1 charcater name in when it should be another name, not a translation issue) and the pronoun issues. What I don't understand is why the story drops off a cliff in the middle of the daughter's side story! That clearly was NOT the end of the side story and yet the novel is marked completed. The main story does get completed and they tie off loose ends with some of the side story prior to the daughter's. Just stop when you get to the daughter's story and it will be fine.

Heads-up! The CEO's Wife is a Hidden Big Boss!

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