Review Detail of TwistedMiracle in To Be Heard: A Mha Fan-Fic

The novel itself felt like a repetition of words (for me), i got annoyed by it at the start of a chapter it would say that mc got bullied then went to the hospital, then on another paragraph same event happen again although different scenario. Then she would question life itself at least 3 times/chapter its getting annoying for me, too much character development (i think that's the point of the novel) but its kind of lacking the story for me its all about her nothing about the world around her nothing about the story depicting the story line of MHA (i know that the story is still on like prologue) but you can do better than that right? I've read some of your stories I kinda like the others, good pace just lacking a bit on the grammar side (nothing wrong about that everyone has their difficulties making sentences specially if English is not their forte) I hope you can fasten the pace on this one.