I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)
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Disukai oleh 397 orang
SUKAWebnovel allows anyone to create novels. Some people are dedicated and some aren't. Not everyone aced literature. someone who is still producing more content still. for him to make 1966 chapters. It can't be perfect. any number of possibilities made him overlook that minor mistake like pressure is he going to get it done on time. no idea. it could also be he was up late last night and got sloppy. who knows. when I read I don't focus on that. if I enjoy it then it's good. if I don't oh well. that dude is better than me when it comes to making a novel. if you have a problem with punctuation then you don't want to read mine. I try at least. I stop after the first chapter. I don't judge others' work especially when they're that far in. he's probably too busy getting chapter 1967 out. He's not worried about chapter 127. I just realized that this reply is for the reply you gave to the other guy. ?? There is nothing wrong with what you put. you have a right to put your opinion. but you realize not everyone is J.K Rowling. thank you for read this annoying long comment. I probably won't reply back because I'm bad at responding to email, messages, and what not. so I won't be able to see it unless I remember to check back tomorrow. 😂
Sir_Otaku_1:Lack of punctuation and proper grammar? You know, the stuff that's vital to books?? Nothing is wrong with me, I'm just used to reading books and webnovels with better editors. Perhaps something is wrong with you for thinking nothing is wrong with the way things are in this webnovel.
Lack of punctuation and proper grammar? You know, the stuff that's vital to books?? Nothing is wrong with me, I'm just used to reading books and webnovels with better editors. Perhaps something is wrong with you for thinking nothing is wrong with the way things are in this webnovel.
DragonMasta:Lack of what? What is wrong with you? Out of all the things I've heard... Lord.
Eh i think Its people being used to rough translations I completely agree if I have to go back and figure out what the author was *trying* to say constantly it certainly breaks the imersion luckily this story doesnt do it often enough to ruin it like a lot of novels on here do
Sir_Otaku_1:Lack of punctuation and proper grammar? You know, the stuff that's vital to books?? Nothing is wrong with me, I'm just used to reading books and webnovels with better editors. Perhaps something is wrong with you for thinking nothing is wrong with the way things are in this webnovel.
I haven't gotten through the whole book yet but he doesn't always rely on others and he makes teenager decisions.
eunjiapink:I like the concept and the story line but I hate the MC...he is very very stupid and don't know how to utilize his power, always hope others to solve the problem
Forrester_Bart:I isr the speech feature for webnovle an you dont Notice the grammar errors or punctuation, maybe try that an see what you think