Review Detail of Sage_HiddenBear in Magic God of DxD
Ulasan detail
Seemed interesting at first. I found some early moments that I wasnt crazy with but still kept readung. By chapter 50 I can honestly say its lackluster. MC who wants so much but doesnt really care for others nor does he really use what he has effectively either. Its an ok fanfiction of a harem story and a slice of life OP story. It doesnt really do either genre justice and is really just a power wank without any real progression of plot. Just grab her, then her, ooo i have a dungeon, and lets grab her. Now he doesnt grab a might massive harem or anything but those he chooses he seems to not cherish much at all. Bottom line, its an ok read and I feel the author could improve the story by creating actual character development, doesnt have to be some big tragedy but simple things like more introspective moments and realizations of behavior attempts at change and or cherishing his family more, etc. Just give it some thought. Good luck!
Magic God of DxD
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