5 chapters out and so far it's one of the best stories I've ever read. The characters personality is great, the set up of levels, skills, and all that is really good. The whole thing of evolving is awesome, it'd be nice if he could befriend some humans eventually, or at least learn their language so he doesn't have to kill them, but regardless, keep up the awesome work and I can't wait for chapter 6!
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