Review Detail of DANIEL_LESAN in Harry Potter and the Heir to Grindelwald

Great fanfic, I'm loving it, but here are a couple of ideas I wonder what the MC will do with the horocrux. I don't think he gets too involved, the only thing that would interfere with it doesn't matter what Ravenclaw's diadem would take over and purify it. Grinderwald's "main" quality is supposed to be Ravenclaw (Thirsty for information and knowledge). I think a quality like that would be attached to the MC. And an mental type / knowledge artifact such as the diadem is a treasure on par with old libraries, which seize no matter what. In addition to the room of lost things and objects (lost / forbidden knowledge) and large quantities of artifacts in addition to the ability to request and then copy the books of the forbidden section and the director's private library. The chamber of secrets surely didn't have just one huge snake. Then something that I have seen little in the fanfiction is that I use the 7 years of hogwarts to create a network of information and / or spyes. The mark of voldemort (I don't know the name of that magic) is immensely usefull, a way of communicating with each other without being too obvious and leaving no (obvious) traces. A test of confidence to the best or most loyal (most powerful, wise, or with special talents such as parselmouth, metamorf, seers, elementary, etc.) its not necessary to make the voldemort way, after all the MC is not likely to follow the path of the sociopath, that usually goes wrong. With the usual hero emerging with his untouchable plot armor (a prophecy for example XDDDDD). You have Morgana to be the most loyal and her shadow, you have well inserted Hermione who is overwhelmingly intelligent and when she is disappointed with the authority and knows the laws concerning pureblood and muggleborn would see how her future career would develop and if she does not marry a pureblood (BLEEERGH Ron) would end quite badly, joining the MC would be a better option apart from marrying Harry (a child damaged by 10 years of abuse who could not recognize anything but a sister), then the MC could love her xd, Luna has its peculiarities, and has an incredible lateral thinking in addition to being a sighted part (nargles and such) as long as he stays close to her or her side will always be loyal, Daphne Greengras, pureblood and her family is from the neutral faction of the wizemagiot too incredibly intelligent, in addition to having great political / economic sense (at least according to ALMOST all the fans), Fleur / Gabrielle are daughters of a high French official if he was not yet a minister besides d and represent Veela, a race in itself (I think her grandmother was one of the leaders of a veela enclave), Padma / Parvati are from one of the oldest families I think that 4000 years (that also usually means extremely powerful) of the India, Cho Chang the same but with China (I think but not so old), ALL these ladies are very intelligent, and if you train them personally, very powerful and can greatly help the MC, by the way you can enchant them and make them your ladies. At least Hermione (the magical world would destroy her if she didn't join the MC) and Luna she would be very powerful, her abilities are too useful (her creatures told her things she isn't supposed to know normally) besides that it would be relatively easy to have his full loyalty (I will not say love because a woman's heart is too complex for us humble mortals) Regarding animagus I don't have many ideas, you have a black fenix and wand with thestral tail, I don't think the Mc is completely dark so I would put something neutral-light, nothing like a normal fenix that its too much. I would always say (even by personal preference) a Thunderbird, they are fucking awesome, and I have read that they used to be considered as heralds of war, if that **** is not impressive I don't know what it is. Thin about it Voldemort-snake Dumbeldore-fenix Harry-drake/deer and the MC-Thunderbird If you have read this far, I hope I have not made you waste too much time on your life span XDDD, that is all I can think of or I have been able to write about your story. If you have not understood everything I am sorry but English is not my first language. BYE