Review Detail of jeanpierregerardo in Everyday life in DxD
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Good plot, it's just always annoying that the system puts penalties xD, but it's fun in its own way. ------------------------ Author, you can consider these characters in their harem: - "Ravel" Phoenix. - grayfia. - yasaka. - Kuroka. - serafall. - ophis. ------------------------ it would be interesting that issei has a sister who has the gear or that the sacred team is divided into parts, or that you change to issei, just my ideas, so many fanfics that I have seen, where the protagonist begins, leaving issei who only thinks about boobs, better do it woman xD.
Everyday life in DxD
Pau1e1is
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Author dxd fanfics become **** when MC has a ****ty idiotic perverted personality with shallow love interests and a beta MC..avoid this..keep MC smart..build romance and keep harem small not gigantic and pls dont make him go after wives or moms..maybe make this an AU
Pau1e1is:Thanks for the suport, I really appreciate it! I will consider it what you given me! :P
you and that famous sucker who enters the fanfic just to talk to keep the harem small will **** you man
amaturewriter:Author dxd fanfics become **** when MC has a ****ty idiotic perverted personality with shallow love interests and a beta MC..avoid this..keep MC smart..build romance and keep harem small not gigantic and pls dont make him go after wives or moms..maybe make this an AU
nah,,,,,,I am just some one with culture,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,a person that hates ****ty written dxd style fanfics with MC just getting women with no romance build......one chp they meet...next chp MC has a harem.....BS ****.................................**** you too bro..........look I am OK with harem if its done well..............
HinataBitchAkamaru:you and that famous sucker who enters the fanfic just to talk to keep the harem small will **** you man