Soo i like the story premise but its all kinda messed up... Mc said he was not more then mediocre in his last life but now u make him a god... U dont use commas very well. And this is my humble opinion but looks like u dont even care at all at your story! U put other weapons bcuz u are lazy?! Don't put the armor quality because u dont know? Like i rlly had some small fun reading this start but there is alot of errors
LordMark
Disukai oleh 2 orang
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