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amaturewriter
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The chapter is soo long that I had to stop midway and give a review...its written and structured well...and half through its pretty intresting... suggestion: keep MC godlike..add world travel...romance and fluff..if harem max 5 anymore and unrealistic...also make MC save the sister of albedo... Anyway these are just suggestion...good show and good luck

Dez Bonez aren't for me [Another DROPPED fanfic]

Wrathos

Disukai oleh 3 orang

SUKA

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Ms_Magician
Ms_MagicianLv5Ms_Magician

The title is almost similar to a fanfic on fanfiction.net where some guy becomes kimimaro in naruto

4yr
DragonkingKyo
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I say not to limit by number if it is a harem

4yr
Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5Kurigohan

Please update your harry potter fanfic :'(

Ms_Magician:The title is almost similar to a fanfic on fanfiction.net where some guy becomes kimimaro in naruto
4yr
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