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2020-05-07 07:32

Great chapter! For your MC Mangekyou Sharingan ability I say have one eye be Obito's Kamui and his other eye be the ability can rewind time. I like another reviewer idea of having his Susanoo be a dragon Susanoo with the color black. If you give him the Kamui ability he won't have to leave the village, so when Itachi begins to kill the Clan he can just teleport himself into his pocket dimension and wait it out. I also think he should get close to Shisui for a chance for him to get his eye to get as his EMS. Then ambush Danzo to take the other eye before he has a chance to use Izanagi. Now onto his Rinnegan ability I think a really cool ability would be Time Skip like Hit from Dragon Ball Super. The ability to jump forward in time and attack your opponents while his other Rinnegan ability allows him to transform into a form of Ultra Instinct that Goku uses in Dragon Ball Super. Update soon!

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Justin_McIlwain
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How about the author just comes up with an original ablities for his character? It seems unoriginal to just copy the main characters ablities when you can literally come up with anything

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