The novel is ok but the grammar kills it like when ur grammar is wrong it changes the meanings of the words and what u are trying to tell in ur story may get interpreted as an another thing I suggest u use grammarly to edit ur chaps.
DarkForces
Disukai oleh 232 orang
SUKAChen_Richard:you should study Chinese and read the Chinese version. that would be much more interesting.
Do you know the original novel's name? I would honestly rather read mtl than this dude's interpretation of it
Jagesa:its because that author using translation machine
Chen_Richard:you should study Chinese and read the Chinese version. that would be much more interesting.