Review Detail of SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST in DxD and The Evil Eyes Master

The story itself isn't to bad but it's so mixed up with concepts from dozens of places that it's not dxd anymore. The MC is too op from the start, the story too oc to be relatable from known perspectives. This is as unique as when someone writes a modern day highschool romance fic ft. Naruto characters minus the ninja thing. The only difference is that the world works differently instead of the lack of powers. A major issue i had was inconsistency in the story. One moment they're on theyre of their first day's of elementary school acting like little kids, with Akeno and rias already in their class, the perverted trio already lustic after the swim club members despite their age and the next he's on his way home and attacked by donaseek. Then he's in school again, sits near someone who he went to middleschool with and is called to the occult research club. Basically the author first writes this as a dxd loli edition then suddenly he's in highschool without the clarity of there having been a time skip. All in all it ain't a bad fic but definitely is one that is too chaotic for me.